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Tue 3 August 2004 - Laura

Laura was her name. It said so on her folder.

She was on the train.

Writing on her folder.

In a very decorative script.

Letter by letter.

Surreptitiously, another guy and I looked on.

As a sentence revealed itself.

“I’d kill myself to make everybody pay.”

Oh.

Dark nails, dark eye makeup, dark clothes.

Bag with a gloom and doom metal band patch on it.

Then her phone rang. She sounded not exactly chirpy, but not exactly down or suicidal.

She got off the train at Caulfield.

Hope you’ve got at least a little sunshine in your life, Laura.

7 Responses to “Laura”

  1. Ren Says:

    Poor Laura. :(

  2. Laura Says:

    Hate it when people read my folder

  3. Paul Wakeford Says:

    Maybe whistling a happy tune would have helped..

    Could have been worse - ‘I’d kill everyone to make everybody pay.’

  4. Cam Says:

    Or :

    I will kill anyone who reads this…..

  5. P Says:

    A sacrificial ticket inspector, who takes her job too seriously, perhaps.

  6. Victor Says:

    I’d kill myself to make everybody pay – it’s a line from the Marilyn Manson song ‘Coma black’.

  7. Daniel Says:

    Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Thanks Victor.